DJCaution's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Factory Floor]

factory floor? i get an image of being in a park in new york near a subway station as a train pulls in. only a 4 rating as it seems to be the same 'loop' for the first minute fading in

tijnn responds:

What can i say, it's ambient, taking things slow makes the eventual impact bigger : )

Too bad you find such complex synthesis boring after a minute though.
I can tell you, it's not a loop ;)

[Passing Of The Veils]

1.57-2.35 ruined this of having 5 stars but other than that segment was immense, get a huge drop in there and jobs a good un'

AliceMako responds:

Well that's just one synth so easily remedied.

Thanks.

[a homeworks reward (jumpstyle)]

quality issues

some parts are a bit to subtle for jumpstyle but overall it is good. biggest issue probably is sound quality your bass is crackling out, ruining the full bass. needs to round your peaks off.

[looking at you]

well...

i was half expecting some texan girl to start singing half way through this:
"well i met this boy johnny...!"
tune has that kindof you know what it is and everyone else knows it but its crap kinda feel, if you get me?

daviddarky responds:

hahaha i know but its a good one haha thanks man hahaha

[A.P.C.F.Y Redux]

your onto something

at first, i mean like for 30 seconds i thought, is this it? this tape going over and over, with me trying to hear something move in the background, but when it finally started you have a nice melody going, nice rhythmn and choice of chord. cut a few 10-20 secs off the beginning and your into a winner, 9/10 for the slow start. sorry.

Kreepman responds:

it's cool xD
The beginning is the original song I recorded waaaaaay back in July :P

[Bitter Sweet Nostalgia]

but whats it for

i couldnt really see this implemented into anything?

[Blue Dance V2]

You made changes....and made it better =]

Originality 5/5
Sound quality 4/5
Variance 5/5
Linking 5/5
Phases 5/5
Vocals 0/5

Overall 4/5

changes to the original tend to go worse, in your case it got better =]

syphonmax responds:

thanks

[Blue Dance]

made me close my eyes a little =]

Originality 4/5
Sound quality 5/5
Variance 4/5
Linking 4/5
Phases 4/5
Vocals 0/5

Overall 3/5

syphonmax responds:

thanks

[Big Party (Babidibababa)]

potential.

Originality 5/5
Sound quality 4/5
Variance 5/5
Linking 5/5
Phases 4/5
Vocals 0/5

Overall 4/5

slow start always needs the change after a minute or so and you did it in this. a heavier bass would have been good though (dance genre remember) and a deeper set throughout but as you can see from the ratings, just lyrics again that's letting you down. alot of potential showing. you;ve been getting gradually higher ratings so don't let me down on the next one. =)

syphonmax responds:

I won't =]

And thanks