factory floor? i get an image of being in a park in new york near a subway station as a train pulls in. only a 4 rating as it seems to be the same 'loop' for the first minute fading in
factory floor? i get an image of being in a park in new york near a subway station as a train pulls in. only a 4 rating as it seems to be the same 'loop' for the first minute fading in
What can i say, it's ambient, taking things slow makes the eventual impact bigger : )
Too bad you find such complex synthesis boring after a minute though.
I can tell you, it's not a loop ;)
1.57-2.35 ruined this of having 5 stars but other than that segment was immense, get a huge drop in there and jobs a good un'
well...
i was half expecting some texan girl to start singing half way through this:
"well i met this boy johnny...!"
tune has that kindof you know what it is and everyone else knows it but its crap kinda feel, if you get me?
hahaha i know but its a good one haha thanks man hahaha
your onto something
at first, i mean like for 30 seconds i thought, is this it? this tape going over and over, with me trying to hear something move in the background, but when it finally started you have a nice melody going, nice rhythmn and choice of chord. cut a few 10-20 secs off the beginning and your into a winner, 9/10 for the slow start. sorry.
it's cool xD
The beginning is the original song I recorded waaaaaay back in July :P
Not as original as some may think.
Originality 2/5
Sound quality 5/5
Variance 3/5
Linking 5/5
Phases 4/5
Vocals0/5
Overall 3/5
Your criticising me for having no vocals? D:
I can't wait to see you come up with somE original stuff. xD
Nice trance phase but for a full song? Seriously.
Originality 4/5
Sound quality 4/5
Variance 1/5
Linking 4/5
Phases 2/5
Vocals 0/5
Overall 3/5
well the 'trance phase' was 64 bar which is 32 seconds for one full go.
perhaps youré right with the variance, but come on :S a 5 ?!. "Seriously"
thats a "This is bad, but never stop practising!" score.
St0rmChaser.